Ormiston Primary school touch
On Tuesday 20th October Mr Mcneil chose 12 people to go to interschool touch. I got chose to go and we went my friends got chose . We did not go in a car we walked to Mission Heights junior college . When we got there we got told our place to sit. The first team we versed was Sancta Maria Primary. We lost but we tried our best to win. Next up was Riverina primary. I scored a try pretty much but the referee said it was not a try . I think if I scored that try it would of been cool because I dived to score. Also Henry scored a try because our team mated were collaborating and passing to each other. Final team we versed was a team that I don't know they were so fast that every second they would intercept it from us and I would start chasing them so hard that I thought I was Usain Bolt.
Hi Rohullah,
ReplyDeleteWow! It sounds like a great day of collaboration and growing your capabilities at Touch. Your recount of the day has great detail. I like your simile- when you compare yourself to Usain Bolt! That is a great literacy device to use when you write, ka pai! I hope you keep practicing and applying your skills.
Ms W
Hi Rohullah,
ReplyDeleteIt seemed like you had a fun time!
Remember to check your spelling before you publish the post.
Your recount is very detailed, so I can picture it in my head =)
From Aleena
Hi Rohullah,
ReplyDeleteIt seemed like you had a fun time!
Remember to check your spelling before you publish the post.
Your recount is very detailed, so I can picture it in my head =)
From Aleena